A house that is stored with secrets
A house that has secrets to hide
A house that knows secrets that are unknown to many
The house looks as if it is a dull hole
I am from the West side now
I am now from a place of new beginnings
I am from a house now that has so much more lovely memories
Memories that I hope to share with one, one day
The friends who have caused negative energy in my life
I have erased those friends from my life, they are all ashes now
The friends I have now are such positivity in my life
They always continue to put a smile on my face
My old friends and who I call my family have always been there, I love them dearly much
My name, Ashley.
Ash is a part of my name
My memories I put away, I burn them and they are ashes now
My new favorite memories are of me meeting new people that I now call friends.
My new friends always cheer me up
They are like a blessing on Earth
The conversations we have always cheer me up
I have become a lot more positive in my life.
There is a chance if you see me, you will see I have a smile on my face.
That is the one thing I love about me,
my smile.
I feel as if my smile is like the moon glowing in the sky.
I really like how you incorporated your name with ashes. It's really cool.
ReplyDeleteI liked your poem and how you feel good about yourself.
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ReplyDeleteWhen you say "they are all ashes now" I feel as though the fires that burned only made you brighter. Keep shining! Be a star.
ReplyDeleteLoved your poem Ashley and you're right your smile is fabulous. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI'm afraid to be your friend now because I don't wanna burn to ash!!! Good job!
ReplyDeleteI like how you said your name is anshley and you burn the memory to ashes. It was a really good set up for your poem.
ReplyDeleteI thought it was great and like the part where you moved to a different area and said it changed your life.
ReplyDeleteI love how you said "Ash is a part of my name. My memories I put away, I burn them and they are ashes now" the way you used ash in that was really nice. I like how you are very confident and that you are a very positive person.
ReplyDeleteAshley, i really like how you said the people in your life fill you with happiness because I know I play a major role in that. ;)
ReplyDeleteGreat poem! I love your ending where you said "I feel as if my smile is like the moon glowing in the sky". Good job :)
ReplyDeleteI loved your poem! I'm just a little surprised that you didn't mention Justin Bieber.
ReplyDeleteI like how you said you burned away all of the bad memories and that you only keep the good ones.
ReplyDeleteI like how you talked about meeting new people and calling them friends. It tells that your an open sweethearted person. Great job!
ReplyDeleteYo dog, that was radical. When you talked about ashes for the first time I was like "oh ashes Ashley. Ahahahah" but then you did.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad that you were able to find better friends and how you were able to get rid of the old friends, who weren't true friends. Someone who is not a true friend to you, but pretends to be, deserves to be burned to ashes, huh?
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